Friday, March 18, 2016

3 Climber

This is John, a tough and brave 28 years climber from USA that had already climbed lots of mountain in the world. On his latest journey he was going to climb Mount Everest.  The biggest  and tallest mountain in the whole wide world, and the only major mountain that he hasn’t climb, yet. Of course he wouldn’t climb it alone. Luckily there were 2 other climber who kindly participate him. They are Norman and Jake. And so they left America and flew away to start their adventure.
After many hours they finally arrive at the bottom of Mount Everest. Standing in front of them is the great Mount Everest, and then they turn back. The thing is the journey from US to Mount Everest is very exhausting, therefore they decide to have a rest in a local village. On the next day all of their energy are refilled, and now nothing was going to bring them down. So they left the village and begun their track up the mountain but they didn’t tell anyone about it and they know it is dangerous.
Step by step they were defeating Mount Everest. But Mount Everest wasn’t that easy to defeat. The slippery ice of the mountain cause John to fall into the edge but he was saved from plummeting to his dead by a ledge. Unfortunately he break his leg , at least he is still alive.
John was useless and can’t do anything. He can only rest while the other are preparing a camp. It is a very uncomfortable night. The temperature drop like crazy and the injured John become ill.
           Just before they lose hope another group of climber appear in front of their eyes. Without hesitating John screamed as loud as he can “ Help, help, help !” (Screaming in a mountain is not recommended) The other group heard them and begin to rush at the direction of the scream, leading the group to John and his group. They came just in time and gave John first aid kit and helped John to safety and everything goes well. Next time, tell someone if you are going to do something, OK ?

2 comments:

  1. Nice Narrative. There are a few grammar mistakes but the story is nice.;-)

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