Best
Gifts Ever!
A quite nice morning indeed. As usual I
woke up in the morning and did all my basic stuff, in rush. That day was a very busy
day, there were 2 test and 3 assignment. No wonder I got very frustated that
day.
As
you all know I was in a hurry that day, I never want to be late. Somehow my
brain always tell me “Be the first Will!” Yup, like that. But in reality it’s
not often for me to fail. By the way have I introduce myself? My name
is William, a 12 years old 7th grader student. Back to the story! So I arrived about 6 in the morning and
manage to study again for my test. Because you know, no one wanted to get bad
mark.
About
8 hours had finally past and at last I could said “So long school !” And again
forgot to tell you this is Friday and I have no school in Saturday! My heart is
pumping out of excitment! Getting away from our class, out of the school! Play
all kind of game and doing other stuff at Saturday! Well that was what i'm
thinking about until the speaker on top of our class scream out loud. Bringing
dissapoinment in my life. Long story short the speaker told us to bring
something to donate to people that have disabilities and we must bring it
tomorrow. Well that’s really a last moment announcement.
I
manage to sleep at night after going through selection of my unused clothes and woke up
earlier than usual to pack all the stuff and went I left my home I was
thinking to myself “ well at least I could see my friends. “
At
school everyone was in the school center point. I was not late and I was not
the last. But I really don’t know why some of them are excited about this
activity, not like me. With a bus we went along the street for a couple of
hour, driving through the traffic jam into our final destination. One by one we
got out from the bus with our stuff that we were donating. Then all the student
started scattering around the place giving their things to the people . People
that is not as lucky as us,
and they
need it more than we do. And the feeling that come through us went we see them smile when we help them. That day
they receive a lot of help and that day I receive the best gift ever.
William H.
The story gas a good plot. Very descriptive. Only there are some grammar and tenses mistakes that you can fix to improve your story. :-)
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