Fictional Writing (Again)

http://www.examiner.com/article/beautiful-architecture-of-abandoned-churches

CHURCH (A Survival Story)

Clearly I don’t know how could they survive. Who are they? They are Zack and Daniel. Zack is my cousin. He is a 13 years old juvenile who live in Seattle, WA, USA and Daniel, he’s just Zack’s best friend. Right now they are in a hospital recovering from the incident. Fortunately, I was able to visit him about 2 days ago before anyone else (well, except from the doctor and nurse and the person that rescue them ) and I was able to gather a little bit of information about all the adventure/pain that they felt.

So it started a few week ago, with a bright morning light shining through Zack’s window straight onto his eye and at the same time my aunt, Zack’s mother shouted from downstairs. “Zack! Come down your breakfast ready!” So he rushed downstairs eat breakfast and do anything that a normal teenager would do and of course he went to school, but then from this moment everything started to change.

To be honest he hated school (me to). All the boring and bad stuff. I mean just think of that! You know what I meant right ? So Zack predict the day to be boring as ever, but he was wrong. A line of bus came from the road entering the school through the tiny gate. I once came there and the gate is small, but not that small. The driver must have skill!

So all of the student entered separate buses and then all the buses started to drive. Zack stared out of the window wandering where will the bus go. But  everything just got stranger and stranger. The road is just not familiar enough. And then finally the buses stop at a bottom of a hill. Zack thought that the road had finally finished but his hearth broke after knowing that he must walk to the top of the hill. And so he walked.

After quite some time they finally reach the top. I don’t know what’s the felling of Zack after walking quite some time up a hill just to see a church, but who know. So long story short he did what everyone would do inside a church and then his teacher gave all the student a break time.

At the perfect time to fall asleep a mysterious figure decide to interrupt. “BOOOO!”said the mysterious figure. Turned up that mysterious figure is Daniel, Zack’s best friend/rival. So yeah, it took sometime to explain the prank to Zack, but at the end Daniel decided to do something that maybe no student dare to do. He rushed down the hill and Zack was forced to follow, because he is smart and he always know that fighting against Daniel is quite an useless act.

Behind the hill, there stand a quite deep forest. And inside the quite deep forest, there stand a old looking church which both of the boy deeply stared at. That church lost all of it windows, the roof looked like it was going to fall, and you can see a lot of dust, event from some distance! Well if you are me, you are totally not going to go inside the church. I won’t even look at it if possible! Unfortunately Daniel is a really adventurous and a really careless boy. So without thinking at all the risk he rushed into the church!

Zack’s instinct said to call the 911, but nope! No signal. So Zack follow Daniel to inside the church. So turned out that everything went well... for a moment, until the rushing Daniel hit a chandelier that somehow stayed light up until Daniel hit it knocking it down to the ground burning the whole church transforming it into a big pile of ash. Luckily both of them are fast enough to escape the fire, but not fast enough to catch the bus on time.

Now hope started to vanish and desperate started to fill up Zack’s hearth. But hey, that’s not the worst thing in the world right? He could just walk home anytime he want. And at the same time and even worse thing happened. A mountain near their location erupted! Now what did he do? I don’t know. I don’t know how did they survive and I don’t know what happened to Daniel ( the nurse won’t let me know ). He literally fell asleep in the middle of the story telling and after that I was forced by the nurse to leave the room. So maybe some of you are asking yourself. Who is this guy that has been talking to me for the past few minutes? Well my name is William.

William H.